Hello, this is Michael. You have made some mistakes that I think would have been easy for you to find. I recommend that before you submit one of your assignments that you read it out loud and change whatever doesn´t look or sound right. Whenever you find a mistake, start reading the sentence over again. Good job.
0:05 change ´´serie´´ with ´´series´´ change movilitation to mobilization
0:11 ...steps you have to ´´do to´´ do the...
instead of saying for example, move the neck doing circles, you would say ´´Move you´re neck in (or ´´making) circles.
0:27 change the first sentence to: The Activation part is harder. You have to run doing different types of movements.
change tipes to types
0:29 ...you have to run ´´while´´ ´´jumping,´´ moving your arms ´´in´´ circles.
0:41 ´´Sprint:´´ you have to run ´´as fast´´ as you can.
0:46 during ´´this´´ you are running ´´and jumping at every third step´´
0:54 you have to run ´´from´´ side to side
0:57 change crossig to crossing change crosing to crossing
1:10 a person is on ´´the´´ line ´´at´´ the center of the court and everyone ´´has´´ to run and cross it ´´without being´´ taken by the hawk. The String - too big of a sentence. Change it into two. The killer ´´has´´ to run... change persons to people
Hello, this is Michael. You have made some mistakes that I think would have been easy for you to find. I recommend that before you submit one of your assignments that you read it out loud and change whatever doesn´t look or sound right. Whenever you find a mistake, start reading the sentence over again. Good job.
ResponderEliminar0:05
change ´´serie´´ with ´´series´´
change movilitation to mobilization
0:11
...steps you have to ´´do to´´ do the...
instead of saying for example, move the neck doing circles, you would say ´´Move you´re neck in (or ´´making) circles.
0:27 change the first sentence to: The Activation part is harder. You have to run doing different types of movements.
change tipes to types
0:29
...you have to run ´´while´´ ´´jumping,´´ moving your arms ´´in´´ circles.
0:41
´´Sprint:´´ you have to run ´´as fast´´ as you can.
0:46
during ´´this´´ you are running ´´and jumping at every third step´´
0:54
you have to run ´´from´´ side to side
0:57
change crossig to crossing
change crosing to crossing
1:10
a person is on ´´the´´ line ´´at´´ the center of the court and everyone ´´has´´ to run and cross it ´´without being´´ taken by the hawk.
The String - too big of a sentence. Change it into two.
The killer ´´has´´ to run...
change persons to people